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Maiden's Promise

What did I promise to you, my prince?
Maiden’s promise pure and chaste,
To love you more and love you deep;
Never leave you, not in my dreams
Always hold you even in your sleep
Will make you strong when things are weak;
Always lift you up and give you strength,
I will always love you near or far,
Together, my heart- we’ll wish for the star.

When things seem gone awry,
Never leave you ashtray;
I’ll always be here when you needed me,
My love for you will never drift away,
The sun will set, soon it will shine
Tomorrow is a promise and things are fine;
My love will lead you back of where you belong
I stand right here and things will come along.

Maiden’s promise will hold the grace,
Love that ties, it’ll forever bliss;
The heaven will bless us and so it is,
Love will hold us, love will guide us,
No sad refrain, no illusions of rains
We’ll celebrate the moment again and again,
Two heartbeats swaying in perfect time
As the music played, we'll hold our love- sublime!



Comments

  1. Love it!!! Is this your pre-valentine poem?

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  2. Wah!

    Full of love!!

    The maiden and the prince (I want one..LOL)

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  3. a pure delight
    explaining a form of love which is most fragile
    but i don't know it feels a bit diffrent from the regular mushy feeling a bit deeper

    may thats my perception

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  4. i loved the first para...
    lovely..so romantic and hopeful


    hugs dear

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  6. Please know that this is true,
    A beautiful poem this is - thank you!

    :)

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  7. "Two heartbeats swaying in perfect time">>>AWWW, such a wonderful play of words! Another great piece of work MysLykeMeeh!

    Have a lovely day! TC. :)

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  8. touched my heart...

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  9. nakita ko na naman yung words na music and dance----I think lovers are really dancers in the game of life....and they promise to catch each other just in case one tumbles.....that's the promise of love

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  10. a romanticist at heart.
    Beautiful pics, your children I guess?

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  11. really touchin n deep. hope i get dis lucky n get a lover like dat. reminds me of d line dat miles 2 go n promises 2 keep. anyways gr8 work written 4om deep inside heart. keep it up.

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  12. i'm feeling love right now... very lovely poem, JO. as always!

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  13. hello! i hope it will be fine with you if i offer some corrections. you might want to take a look at these things:

    When things seem gone awry,
    Never leave you ashtray;-it should be astray, right?

    My love for you will never drifts away,- should be drift instead of drifts

    The sun will set, soon they will shine- should be soon it will shine (again)

    My love will lead you back of where you belong - should be to where you belong

    it was a nice poem just needs some revision.

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